!FYdHVbm2Ik 12/21/10(Tue)22:06 No.22073791|
Before I go to bed, here's a little preview of a story I'm working on. Please criticize.
Fluttershy slowly flew through the Apple farm to look for her friend Applejack. Hearing the noise of tree getting bucked, Flutteryshy jumped behind a tree out of natural reaction. Looking behind her, Fluttershy saw that it was only Big Mac. Turning forward for another breath, she then looked back again, to see that Big Mac and Applejack were talking, and that Big Mac was smiling while Applejack's face was uncomfortable. Muttering a whimper, Fluttershy turned her head once more, and knocked it back against the tree, sending an apple down that bonked her in the head and knocked her out.
When she came to, Fluttershy couldn't hear a thing. Looking around, Fluttershy saw that Applejack was tied up in a tree that was tied to a ground. Fluttershy then noticed that Big Mac was also around, and that he looked like he was burying something. Big Mac then turned around to the angry looking tied-up Applejack, and walked up to her with a talking smile. Turning her eyes towards what Big Mac was burying, Fluttershy couldn't even make a sound as she noticed that what was sticking out of the object resembled a small pony's red tail just like Apple Bloom's... Exactly like Apple Bloom's.